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The Star Spangled Sky by =Nytram12:iconNytram12:



Feel blades of green tickling at my neck
As I lay out on my back, looking up above
I wish you could be here with me
Under the star spangled sky.

I don’t know who you are,
Where you’re from or what you do,
One thing I know, I want to be with you
Gazing into the star spangled sky.

Warm dusk air drifts over me
My mind posing intricate ideas
For me to ponder as I lay
Under the star spangled sky
©2009-2010 =Nytram12
:iconnytram12:

Author's Comments

aah finally. i thought up that one line last nite as i was looking out the window @ 2 in the morning.. thinking about america for some reason so i came up with star spangled sky =p then i spent the next day (inbetween revision) trying to work it into a poem. now i have :D

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:iconthewonderfulhermit:
Nice title, it's got some really calm imagery in it. Lovely... =P

OMG! I was looking out my window last night at 2:00am! *gasp!* But only because it was so cold I couldn't get to sleep. Brrr!
:iconnytram12:
lmao i was just getting a drink and happened to look out the window =p and thanks :D

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:iconlostbrethilien:
:+fav::heart:

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:iconnytram12:
:d ty :D

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:iconblackheart276:
Lol, nice :aww: Has a happy calming feeling to it.

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:iconnytram12:
yeah it kinda does doesn't it... didn't really notice last nite as i was drifting off lol

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Life is just living in confusion. Its what you make of that confusion that matters

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:iconanimefan12691:
I think this is very romantic and hopeful :love:

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"Everyone needs something that they love wholeheartedly, and will continue to love no matter what others think or say."
:iconblueberrysloth:
Very nice :)
It made me want to be with someone under the stars ♥

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I've got nothing hopeful on my mind, so I guess I'll just curl up and ryhme, leaking precious words uselessly, until they mean something to me.

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