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Fingers of words
Playing a grand piano
Sometimes striking a chord
When the right keys are pressed
Aligning the hammers inside
In harmonious joy
All it takes
Is a single person
Who knows where your keys are
To play your piano
In ways that make sense
To both of you
The most difficult part
Is finding the pianist of your mind
©2009-2010 =Nytram12
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i love this :D

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:iconblackheart276:
What a great extended metaphor! It's so beautifully written, I love this piece as well. Fantastic job, defiantly one of your best. :) Keep it up! :hug:

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Carpe Diem (Seize The Day)

Live each day as if it were your last, because you never know what the future will bring you.


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:iconnytram12:
why thank you :D i didn't particularly think it was that much

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*good

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Life is just living in confusion. Its what you make of that confusion that matters

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:iconthewonderfulhermit:
A pretty great poem I reckon. Made me smile :)

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Am I a man that dreams of being a butterfly,
or a butterfly that dreams of being a man?
:iconnytram12:
good :D

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Life is just living in confusion. Its what you make of that confusion that matters

Want to get more feedback on your prose or poetry? ---> *Writers-Club
:iconthewonderfulhermit:
It was :)

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Am I a man that dreams of being a butterfly,
or a butterfly that dreams of being a man?
:iconnytram12:
glad u liked it :D

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Life is just living in confusion. Its what you make of that confusion that matters

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:iconsuperclone:
i love pianos

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I Became Insane With Long Intervals of Horrible Sanity.
- Edgar Allen Poe
:iconnytram12:
hehe kwl

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Life is just living in confusion. Its what you make of that confusion that matters

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