O’ sweet hummingbird,
Will you alight upon my finger?
Stop your busy little wings,
Take the time to talk to me?
O’ sweet hummingbird
Appear by my lonely side
Whenever I feel down
To lift me back up again
O’ sweet hummingbird
You’re a tiny blur in my eyes
Distracting my thoughts
From their gloomy path
O’ sweet hummingbird
Guide me through the dark
Lead me to the silver lining,
The gold over the rainbow
O’ sweet hummingbird
Please reveal yourself to me
For now, more than ever
I need your help
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awwh i quite like this one
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 Awh, it's sweet! ^w^
Like a guardian angel type thing? That's a cliché, though c: A hummingbird's a really interesting notion.. what made you use it in particular? o: -- ☆ { ĸ e z z ı } THE TOXiC KiTTY™ Dinosaurs aren't e x t i n c t ; they're just shy♥ to be honest i have no idea what made me think hummingbird.. and yeah i guess you could say its a metaphor for a guardian angel. its not what i was thinking of but hey, its all about how the reader interprets is rite?
-- Life is just living in confusion. Its what you make of that confusion that matters Want to get more feedback on your prose or poetry? ---> *Writers-Club  It's so inspiring ad loving.
 Nice wording too, great flow.-- Carpe Diem (Seize The Day) Live each day as if it were your last, because you never know what the future will bring you.  Avatar made for me by my dear friend ~xGrimFirex hehe thanks
 u see why i likes it?-- Life is just living in confusion. Its what you make of that confusion that matters Want to get more feedback on your prose or poetry? ---> *Writers-Club Defiantly
 -- Carpe Diem (Seize The Day) Live each day as if it were your last, because you never know what the future will bring you. Avatar made for me by my dear friend ~xGrimFirex good
 -- Life is just living in confusion. Its what you make of that confusion that matters Want to get more feedback on your prose or poetry? ---> *Writers-Club  It's cute, I like hummingbirds, theyre very fast little things
 -- Frozen with pain Burning with hate hehe yeah they are. very kwl little animals
and apparently good for metaphors -- Life is just living in confusion. Its what you make of that confusion that matters Want to get more feedback on your prose or poetry? ---> *Writers-Club YES! they are.
-- Frozen with pain Burning with hate hehe
-- Life is just living in confusion. Its what you make of that confusion that matters Want to get more feedback on your prose or poetry? ---> *Writers-Club |
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