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Downwards I go, mentally broken
My skill goes out the door
I lose my balance, shake and stumble,
Before I go face first into the floor
Where has this come from?
Why, when I most need stability
Does everything fall apart,
Increasing my fragility?
Still I am not strong enough
Still I let things get to me
Still I haven’t learnt my lesson
For when I do, I shall finally be free.
©2009-2010 =Nytram12
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:iconlankadoodle:
Awww, its soooo sad....
Hpe you'll become free soon..
X

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Listen: No amount of noise can silence the soul ;)

=)OrAnGe--SmArTiEs=)
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When Tears become part of your daily routine, Im afraid it's time to admit that something may be wrong...
~~~The sooner you face it, the faster you'll fix it~~~
:iconhikarishadows:
you have a weird knack for taking what's going on in my head and putting it into words lol

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♫ So close your eyes
And say your prayers
Because I don't have any words
Left for you ♪ ~ Camui Gackt
:iconnytram12:
i must be highly telepathic them =p
not that what i was writing about was a good thing

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:iconnytram12:
so do i

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Life is just living in confusion. Its what you make of that confusion that matters

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:icon3cheers4sweetpotatos:
unfortunately i can relate to this =[
good job though =]

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'Gay' Isn't A Synonym For 'Shitty'
:iconnytram12:
ty and sorry :hug:

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Life is just living in confusion. Its what you make of that confusion that matters

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:iconblackheart276:
Reminds me of the great circle of life, lol.

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Carpe Diem (Seize The Day)

Live each day as if it were your last, because you never know what the future will bring you.


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:iconnytram12:
really?

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Life is just living in confusion. Its what you make of that confusion that matters

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:iconwolfskie:
awww its sad :hug:

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Frozen with pain
Burning with hate
:iconnytram12:
i know :(

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Life is just living in confusion. Its what you make of that confusion that matters

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